// Loom Script — 5 Minutes
What you say while recording
Target: 4:30—6:00. Camera on for opening + closing only. Screen-share for findings.
0:00 — 0:30 // OPEN
[Camera on. Smile. Direct.]
"Hi [Owner first name], I'm Jordan from Masterful — Nairobi-based growth practice for independent lodges. I spent thirty minutes looking at [Lodge Name]'s online presence, and there are three specific things costing you direct bookings every month. Made this 5-minute walkthrough so you can see exactly what they are."
No fluff. State who, what, what they're about to see.
0:30 — 1:30 // FINDING 1 (GBP)
[Switch to screen share. Pull up their GBP.]
"First — your Google Business Profile. Categories listed: [X]. The eight missing — let me show you what they are — capture the high-intent searches. 30-minute fix, typically 15-30% lift in GBP enquiries within 60 days."
Show, don't tell. Live walk through their actual profile.
1:30 — 2:30 // FINDING 2 (FUNNEL)
[Click through their flow live, click by click.]
"Second — your booking funnel. Watch this. One — two — three — four — five — six — seven clicks to book. Industry benchmark is three. Each extra step loses 8-12 percent. Booking.com is two clicks. Fix: embed the booking engine on the homepage. 25-40% direct conversion lift inside 90 days."
The live click-through is the most powerful part of the entire video. Do not skip it.
2:30 — 3:30 // FINDING 3 (CHANNEL MIX)
[Show their Booking.com + review velocity vs TripAdvisor.]
"Third — biggest one. Looking at your review velocity, my read is roughly 70-85 percent of your bookings come through Booking.com. At your room rate, roughly $[X] per month in commission. Even shifting 30 points to direct over 9-12 months recovers $[Y]. That's margin you already earned, going to a third party."
Wallet-opening moment. Slow down. Land the dollar number.
3:30 — 4:30 // SYNTHESIS
[Optional: switch back to camera.]
"So — three fixes. GBP categories. Booking funnel. Channel mix shift. Conservative estimate: $[total] per month on the table right now. Not theoretical — operational. None require a site rebuild. Six to eight weeks to implement."
4:30 — 5:00 // CTA
[Camera on. Friendly. Specific ask.]
"If you want, I'll walk you through the fixes in detail on a 20-minute call. Reply to this email or WhatsApp with a time, or grab a slot at masterful.app/call. Either way — hope this is useful. Cheers, [Lodge Name]."
End on their name, not yours.
// SEND
Email subject: "5-min audit of [Lodge Name]'s direct bookings — 3 specific findings"
WhatsApp opener: "Hi [Owner Name], Jordan here from Masterful in Nairobi. Made you a 5-min audit of [Lodge Name]'s direct bookings — three specific things costing you margin each month. Worth 5 minutes? [Loom link]"